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Trapped Inside

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Why do I feel this way,
As if peering through a suit of armour?
My spirit, my heart, my soul, they live,
Trapped inside this shell I call a body,
The eyes I see through shed light on my world,
But it doesn't seem like they're mine,
For though I was born this way,
Somehow I know it should be different,
Inside me I feel there's a better way,
Not needing these eyes to see,
Ears to hear, or skin to feel and touch,
But a naked soul and spirit, fully aware,
Existing on its own apart from restricting flesh,
For now though, I remain caught inside,
Maybe it's supreme will I stay this way,
Locked away inside this dying corpse,
Maybe it's my sins that make it a prison,
Maybe it's my penance to remain captive,
Until finally I die and we part ways,
My body rotting in it's grave,
The rest of me ascending onto heaven,
Which is better than anything I've known,
While living inside this shell.
Wrote this a while back, and I mean a WHILE back, like a couple years, but interestingly enough my thoughts are returning to a similar line as of late.

And for the record, yes, it's been cleaned up. My old writing style was a bit too verbose for my tastes, so I changed it.
© 2011 - 2024 Trudos
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BlueDreamer77's avatar
I like it and its very much like you.