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Falling Apart

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Falling apart,
Screaming their names,
Not one of them came back to me.

Sitting there,
Lost in my thoughts,
Wondering if anyone cared what they were.

Dreaming away,
Hand stretching out idly,
Wishing there was someone to hold it.

Falling apart,
Everything breaking down,
My heart corrodes away under my lifeless stare.
Yes, I'm aware I repeated the line Falling Apart. It's deilberate
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BlueDreamer77's avatar
I very much like this poem. I think I've been that person in each verse except the last but I will one day. But I really do love it. :)